House of Balloons: Opening titles

This is the opening titles for the film. I doubt that they will be used in the final cut because I am trying to throw the viewer into the movie instantly and only show the title at the end. I also want the title to be presented in a minimal manner without many effects (e.g. just plain text on the screen) so it does not distract majorly with the atmosphere I am trying to create. I feel if I put in seperate titles it abruptly make the atmosphere have less impact on the viewer.